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| BloodyBrilliant |
Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:14 pm |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2005
Posts: 6
Location: Suburb of NYC, USA
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Hi,
I have written my first HP fanfic and would love to have someone pick it to bits! The following is some information about my piece.
Archive: Lumos
Angst
Genre: Angst, friendship
Characters: Harry, Ron, Hermione, the Weasley's
Time: Immediately after HBP
Warnings: HBP Spoilers
Rating: C
Words: 3,770
One Shot
This is mostly what is going on in Harry's head immediately following the end of HBP. His inner turmoil between loving his friends and not wanting to put them at risk, being lonely, hating his destiny, and realizing that the path this indignation will lead to is Voldemort's. At the end he finds love with the Weasley family. Nothing sexual of any nature.
I am seeking a Beta Reader to review and assist me with grammar, punctuation, plot & tense continuity, brit picking, and cannon. I guess that's basically everything isn't it?
If you are interested please e-mail me at RuthieTFF@optonline.net or through this forum. I wrote my piece in Microsoft Word. Although I can cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail if you don't have Word.
Thank you.
Ruthie (BloodyBrilliant) |
_________________ "I felt weird though, like I'd never be cheerful again." Ron Weasley HP-POA |
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| BloodyBrilliant |
Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:34 pm |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2005
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Location: Suburb of NYC, USA
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Thanks to my Beta for doing such a great job. I am humbled and tickled pink at your Beta comments - YOU ARE SO RIGHT!  |
_________________ "I felt weird though, like I'd never be cheerful again." Ron Weasley HP-POA |
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