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Joined: 22 Dec 2007
Posts: 1
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Name: Lily
Email: gillie_girl@hotmail.com
Story title: Disappointed Dreams
Summary: Love lost, love gained. Severus has quite a lot of regrets, and he's not handling them too well. A visit to a white room and a father figure's forgiveness lighten his soul. Will his lady love return? [corny, yes, but hey, I was not cut out to be a summary writer.]
Rating: Suggestive, T. Not anything raunchy, just a little binge drinking and self-loathing.
Category/Genres: AU, drama, romance, tragedy
Ship: SS/HG
Warnings: Drug abuse, self-mutilation [in a way, nothing graphic], suicide.
Really, I just need another pair of eyes to catch the mistakes I haven't. Verb tenses, grammar, spelling, avoidance of awkwardness, cliches, confusing metaphors, etc. Any help would be much appreciated. I just want to get this story out of my hair, because the plot had been bugging me for so long, and now I just need to get it perfected to let it free.
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