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shanfawn16
Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 5:19 pm Reply with quote
Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 6 Location: North Carolina
Hello. I'm about half way through writing a story featuring Harry and Draco. At this point, I'm looking mainly for some grammar/brit picking advice, although I may need some plot points to help me through some of the stickier bits.

The story begins after HBP, and will continue through the search for the Horcruxes and defeat of Voldemort. It will probably be roughly 10 chapters or so when finished, although I already have 6 written. The focus of the story will be on the relationship between Harry and Draco, with the search being more of a backdrop.

I love this website, and I'm itching to get posted here! Please Help!!!

~Shannon

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Owlbait
Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:50 pm Reply with quote
Joined: 01 Jul 2005 Posts: 92
What's the rating? Any warnings?

Is the story posted anywhere else already?

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shanfawn16
Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 7:19 pm Reply with quote
Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 6 Location: North Carolina
It will be an L rating, for some graphic sexual situations beginning in the 3rd chapter. No real ratings other than Slash, as far as I can tell so far. It follows HBP, and I've tried to keep canon through that book.

It's not posted anywhere else, yet, but I am also trying to publish on Checkmated, although they have not been receptive lately to any kind of "alternative" love stories.

I do have another author perusing the first couple of chapters, but no official agreement has been made yet, and the more help I can get, the better!

Thanks for your interest!!! Very Happy

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shanfawn16
Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:35 am Reply with quote
Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 6 Location: North Carolina
Just an update on the story. It's completely written, for a total of 13 chapters. This one practically wrote itself! I'm still looking for an official beta, and would welcome all constructive criticism! If anyone would like to test drive the first couple of chapters, just to see if it piques their interest, I'd be happy to hand them over.

My email is shanfawn16@yahoo.com

If you would like to see some of my other work, I am posted at Checkmated.com under the author ID HPShannon

Thanks!

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