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Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Posts: 3
Location: New Hampshire, USA
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Name: Kat
Email: katisawriter@hotmail.com
Story Title: I’m tentatively titling it Redemption. It is in its early stages. I really don’t like titling stories until I’ve finished them.
Paring: Snape/OFC
Summary: Ariana Makda was born deep in the Congo rainforest. A member of the Khala Inyoni. a tribe who have limited magical abilities but can heal their bodies by sheer will alone and posses great physical strength. As a result of a tragic betrayal she is turned into vampire. Having hidden away from the world for over a decade Ariana is violently pulled back into the world and into the battle between the Order of the Phoenix and Voldemort. She swears her allegiance to the side of the light. But in rejoining the battle she will have to face her gruesome past.
Severus Snape has resumed his life as a double agent for the Order of the Phoenix, but at what cost? Risking his life everyday for a seemingly thankless group is taking a heavy toll on Snape. Not to mention another tedious semester trying to keep the pesky ‘boy who lived’ out of trouble. His patience is wearing thin.
Ariana and Snape instantly agree on one thing – the other can not be trusted. But as they learn more about each other a tenuous relationship forms that gives them each shelter from the battle raging in the outside world. But there are secrets in each of their pasts that could lead them to be split apart forever.
(*wow I didn’t mean that to sound like dust jacket of a bodice ripper. It just came out that way. If you’d like to know more about the plot – email me!*) 
Rating: It will drift from PG13 to R for violence. There will be at least one NC17 sex scene in it.
Category/Genres: Angst, Humor, Drama, Romance
Warnings: The OFC in this story is a vampire which will require her to drink blood supplied to her. This includes the possibility of biting and drinking during sex. I know blood can be a touchy subject for some people. Also there will be violence in this story how graphic – I’m not quite sure yet.
Any special requests that the beta reader will need in beta reading for you: I want someone to help me hash though the plot itself. It would be nice to have someone to bounce ideas off of that would give me an honest opinion. OFC’s being a genera that many in the HP fanfic universe really don’t care for; I’d like to make this story as good as possible. More importantly I’d like someone who can be honest with me in making critical comments about my story.
I am expecting this story to get to and perhaps exceed fifty pages. I’ve already written the first 2 chapters and its already 17 pages (8,000 words). I also would like to add that I do not have a plotline from beginning to end complete. I have certain events plotted out that I know I want to happen but there is some blank space in between that needs to be filled in. I have several pages of notes composed for the story including a plotline, timeline, and notes about events that have happened before the story takes place. I would be happy to share all of these with my beta if it would be help them.
Please feel free to contact me with any questions you might have. |
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