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< Seekers ~ MURDER, LOVE-TRIANGLES, DECEPTION, MY STORY WILL HAVE IT ALL |
| mezil |
 Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 9:13 pm |
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I am currently writing a story that i had originally posted at fanfiction.net, but i never finished it and after the publication of book 6, my story was out of canon, and im a stickler for canon, so i removed it from their site.
But now im now re-writing it, picking up where book 6 ended. I'd love a beta to look over my story as my grammer is horrible despite years of higher education.
Currently my story has a tentive title of "buried" or "best laid plans", i currently have 13 pages, and i would like it to be a one shot if possible.
This is a SS/OFC BUT!!! don't let that scare you off, it non-romantic in nature, and not what i would consider a "mary sue" In this story im writing about severus' life beyond hogwarts, how he joined the death eaters, and his relationship surrounding an original character who still fits into the canon without disruption. Evan Rosier is also important charcter in this story, he was metioned briefly in book 4 and he grabed my attention. Other characers who make an apparance: Draco Malfoy, and Potter, bella lestrange, mad-eye moody, the gangs all here, but Im not sure as to a rating yet.
I have the story outlined and i would like to complete it before the end of janurary. So any takers to be my beta? Im not just looking for a proof-reader, someone to bouce ideas off of would be greatly appreciated.
Happy New Year!
Mezil |
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| mezil |
| Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 1:53 am |
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Im beginning to think that there are no beta's left. We are all seekers. But to be sure i will dangle a carrots from my story.
Draco narrowed his eyes at her, but didn’t finish his curse. He moved to the door, not turning his back on the woman. He placed his hand on the door handle gave it a turn, he could feel the night air seep in through the crack, “Tell Snape he’s a fool for taking that oath, no one’s worth it.” With those final words, he slipped out the door and was gone from sight.
The woman sighed, and slammed the door behind the boy. “Tell him yourself when he gets back you ungrateful little shite.”
Well? let me know what you think |
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| phoenix |
| Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:12 am |
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