Joined: 22 Feb 2005
Posts: 54
Location: California
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Name: phoenix
Email: jgray7 @ san.rr.com
Story title: Redemption
Summary: Lucius Malfoy has finally realized the Dark Lord has been spinning nothing but lies. Unfortunately, it took him losing his family to realize this. Now, he is trying to atone for his sins. Will anyone trust him? Will anyone help him regain his place in society? He has a plan. Set after HBP.
Rating: R/W
Category/Genres: Drama/Romance
Ship: LM/HG
Warnings: It's taking a turn for the darker and may be getting into the realm of abuse/torture.
Okay, I've pretty much got the grammar and spelling covered, so that's not necessarily something you as a beta reader need to excel at. This one is a WIP and the first 9 chapters are posted. What I need help with is some of the characterization in the next couple of chapters. There are going to be arguments and strained tempers and I want to make sure characters are behaving as expected, most especially Harry and Moody, both of whom I know I am weak with.
I'm also looking for opinions on a character pairing for chapter 11. Not in a romantic sense, but in a forced to endure each others company sense. I'm waffling between using 3 different characters stuck with Lucius for a time. Each has potential, but I want to bounce this idea off others before choosing one. I have a serious potential to back myself into a corner on this one.
So, if you are interested at a sneak peek and a hand in deciding minor fates, drop me a line. The main story arc is done, it's just getting there effectively. |
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