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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 4
Location: Chicago
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Hello,
I have had many beta readers who give their opinion on plot and characterizations in my stories. However I have acute learning disabilities and my English mechanical skills are severely lacking. I am in need of someone who doesn't mind pointing out what I fear will be numerous punctuation errors, and the occasional canon spelling mistake.
For me, dialog punctuation rules are what really stand in my way of being successfully posted to the Ashwinder Forum.
I have four stories I would eventually like to post to Ashwinder, however I will not get there on my own.
Story Title: The Acquisitioner
Author: hallowsnape
Email: mo.oleary@gmail.com
Summary: In the aftermath of the battle, Hermione is forever changed by a dark weave of magic. In the resulting path of Voldemort's destruction she must walk in the realms of shadow to preserve the side of light.
Plot: Hermione and Ginny survive the battle to discover that they have been changed somehow through a catastrophic merge of power that knocked them unconscious during the Hogwarts battle. The Order is in shambles, with some of the members betraying their friends to save their own skins. Hermione and Ginny begin a business under false names to survive in the world that is left to them. As they become emmursed in the resulting Death Eater society, it becomes readily apparent that while Harry Potter is listed as captured, the Death Eaters have no clue where he or the Dark Lord really are. Through all of this, Snape is on the run from both sides. Draco, the only remaining spy the Order has left has been financing his godfather since the end of the battle. Hermione and Snape cross paths, wherein treachery and eventually romance ensue.
HG/SS,(situational HG/LM) GW/RL, HP/DM.
Ashwinder Forum
Rating: L (NC-17) Drama, Friendship, Intrigue/Mystery (Alternative Universe since DH)
Warnings: Character Death, torture, non-con (implied), graphic violence and sexual situations.
DH ignored, HBP canon.
Five chapters are already written of this novel length fiction.
Hope to hear from someone.
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