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Joined: 24 Jul 2007
Posts: 2
Location: Richmond, VA, USA
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Hello,
I am looking for someone to beta a Snape/Lily fic. It's three chapters, about 7000 words, and focuses on the last time(s) they saw each other. It's somewhat canonical, but A/U in regards to their actual relationship. The first two chapters were written before DH, the last after. Yes, there are DH spoilers, but they are minor enough that you'd have to read DH to know they were spoilers.
I'm in need of grammar help, mine isn't horrendous, but not spectacular either. Plus I've read the story so many times I have a hard time seeing what is there as opposed to what I think is there.
Other help, ideas, edits are welcome as well. (Especially summary help!)
Please email me if you are interested.
Thanks,
Keryl
Name: Keryl Raist
Email: kerylr@yahoo.com
Title: Twenty Years
Summary: Snape last saw Lily in August 1977. This covers that last meeting, and the twenty years between that day, and the day he saw her again.
Rating: W or L for the first chapter, the rest is C
Category: Romance
Ship: Snape/Lily
Warnings: None, ineffective use of commas. |
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