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Zen Lady
Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 4:24 pm Reply with quote
Joined: 13 Oct 2005 Posts: 15 Location: on the path to wisdom
Name: Zen Lady

Email: astarte037@yahoo.com

Story title: Children of the Goddess
http://archive.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?id=2103

Summary: Somewhat AU, starts in November during the “Prisoner of Azkaban”. Dumbledore asks a former student to help detect and catch the murderer Sirius Black before he can harm anyone. As events unfold, the past is slowly revealed.

Rating: basically PG with some R

Category/Genres: drama, romance

Ship: RL/OFC

Warnings: alcohol abuse, R-rated scenes in the future.

As far as adult scenes, I consider mine R, though I’m sure others might call them NC-17. Pretty much straightforward het in my opinion.

Other info: It’s already 28 chapters, and there will be a lot more, so I need someone for the long haul! I finish a chapter approximately every two weeks.

I need comprehensive feedback on plot and characterization. I don’t need help with grammar/spelling, though the occasional typo gets by me.

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