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Joined: 21 Oct 2006
Posts: 14
Location: Norway
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Hi to all you wonderful Beta readers. Wanna help me? I have written my first fanfic and would like a Beta reader to check for plot errors or bad writing. I`m from Norway, so no first-hand english learning, but I have had friends to check for spelling errors, and I have used a spelling program, so there shouldn`t be any errors of that kind. But I would like to know if I have a good sentence structure and a flow to the words that makes the reading easy on the eyes 
The story is a Luna/Hermione pairing, as I feel there is way to little Luna in the world! She rocks.  The story title is "Seeing what is hidden", I dont think there are any warnings (there are some sex though, Beta coming in), rating I have no clue how to handle, category Dissendium.
Summary: Luna uses the Room of Requirement regularly at night, after her father was killed and their house was burned down in a death eater attack. She is lonely, no one sees through her mask of weirdness and so she has no one to confide in or share her thoughts with. Luna is in love with Hermione, but thinks it can never become anything. It`s their 7th year. Heart aching romance follows... The story is not very long, 5 pages on a word processor program, but I will be working on it if a Beta thinks so.
Well, my e-mail adress is: hillis83@hotmail.com, it is also my msn messenger.
Someone please help me, as I would love to se if I can be a writer!! 
Thank you for having the patience to read through all of this!
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