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Joined: 01 Jul 2006
Posts: 2
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My current beta reader is swamped, and has instructed me to find a first; she will stay on as my second. My grammar is pretty shabby; I need nitpicker. I like brutal honesty about the plot, but I also like to argue my point (respectfully). I would like a beta who argues theirs as well. If the chapter doesn't work, I want to know why. I will value all of your input. Hopefully, together we can polish my story into the sparkling gem that it could be.  I need to keep this Canon as well. A Brit picker would be a big plus!
I have 17 chapters and am currently working on the 18th. This is the first fan fiction I have written. I don't really know how long this will be in the end. Warning: I'm wordy (in e-mails and my story).
Here is all my pertinent info:
Name: Mia
Email: Miajinx@cinci.rr.com
Story Title: Despondeo
Summary: Sirius Black meets the Muggle Helena while on the run. Helena is in hiding from her own version of Lord Voldemort. Turmoil forces Sirius to introduce her to a bizarre new world, where she finally meets the man she's been dreaming about since she was a small child.
Ship: SS/OC
Genres: Mystery/suspense, Drama, Angst, Action/Adventure, Romance, Friendship
Warnings: Character Death, Self Mutilation, Abuse, BDSM, Drug Abuse, Torture, HBP Spoilers
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Original Character, Severus Snape, Sirius Black . . . and more.
Rating: L |
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